Nice piece of work but it needs images to support - either off the internet, or you can take stills from your piece. That will take it to a high mark. You also might want to say where you'll get your props from. Make sure you always think about connotations of clothes/props/locations too. You do most places but not always. Good start - another hour or so on it and it'll be very good. L3
Nice piece of work but it needs images to support - either off the internet, or you can take stills from your piece. That will take it to a high mark. You also might want to say where you'll get your props from. Make sure you always think about connotations of clothes/props/locations too. You do most places but not always. Good start - another hour or so on it and it'll be very good. L3
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