Wednesday, 17 October 2012

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  1. Nicely written (CHECK GRAMMAR - start sentences with capital letters) but no images!

    You need a couple of pics for section, to illustrate what you're talking about.

    What do you make of the film opening?
    What conventions of film openings are met (you don't mention studio logo or titles, for example).

    What messages/meanings do the micro elements create when combined? Think about genre too.

    Currently a low Level 3 (C-). Make above changes to push it towards an A.

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