To make it that little bit better i'd support each image with a little bit of text, saying what we can see (e.g. 'The studio's name', or the 'key cast members')
Genre section (and throughout), make sure you say 'film OPENINGS', as that's what we're mostly concentrating on.
Capital letters for film names - The Bounty Hunter, not the bounty hunter!
Location/Establishing shots - you need examples. Pyscho and Citizen Kane are 2 examples off the top of my head. Same with enigma. All films have enigma in their opening so they should be easy to find.
When you replace this with the updated Prezi - keep it in this post so I can look back on my comments - cheers
Currently a level 3 (B-) but it'll be an A with the changes i've mentioned.
I made some updates to the prezi, I think I've included everything you mentioned in the comment but if there's anything that still needs doing just tell me and I'll get it fixed up again
Good Lara
ReplyDeleteTo make it that little bit better i'd support each image with a little bit of text, saying what we can see (e.g. 'The studio's name', or the 'key cast members')
Genre section (and throughout), make sure you say 'film OPENINGS', as that's what we're mostly concentrating on.
Capital letters for film names - The Bounty Hunter, not the bounty hunter!
Location/Establishing shots - you need examples. Pyscho and Citizen Kane are 2 examples off the top of my head. Same with enigma. All films have enigma in their opening so they should be easy to find.
When you replace this with the updated Prezi - keep it in this post so I can look back on my comments - cheers
Currently a level 3 (B-) but it'll be an A with the changes i've mentioned.
Keep it up
I made some updates to the prezi, I think I've included everything you mentioned in the comment but if there's anything that still needs doing just tell me and I'll get it fixed up again
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